Nice one!
I remember Fantastic Realm being one of the first movies i reviewed when i made an account on newgrounds. I was really overwhelmed by it and thought at the time that it was one of the best flashes ever.
First off, i noticed you wrote a brilliant response to a review of a previous user. 'No doubt, it seemed like some people really have it in for us sometimes. Its funny how vicious people can get when you try to offer them free entertainment!'. Haha that is so true man, couldnt agree more.
Anyway, this episode was in some ways amazing also. Very proffessional and well thought out. The visuals are stunning and posses the right cartoony touch. Same goes for the audio. There isnt much you can improve on the visual/audio area.
I also noticed how many usuers think the story is unoriginal and without surprises. Unfortunately i cant completely disagree with them. It is a very ambitious series and its extremely important that you will manage to give it an own identity in order to become really great. You partly succeeded in this with the castle guard character and the main villain, but overall, it lacks detailness in the way you tell and present things. The evil wizard was just an evil wizard. The pretty girl was a pretty girl and her dumb comical companion was just a dumb comical companion.
I would strongly suggest to take more time and shape every character into extreme detail and add more unique things to them. Everyone loves Xombie, because of his awesome one liners, his confusing purpose and his still warm personality. Everyone loves Darth Vader because of his voice acting, his skill with the lightsaber and the slight sense of good in him. These are just examples, but I think you know what i mean. I was kinda missing that in the characters of this movie. They were there and had their purpose for the story, but nothing more. In the end, it is what seperates a well drawn proffessional approached movie from an epic memorable series.
Anyway, keep it up, you people are definately going in the right direction, and the talent is literally shining of the episodes. Just spend a little bit more time in thinking about how to reach the heart of the viewers.
AITD