congratulations
Congratulations man, this is by far the worst flash iv ever seen. Not only have i heard this joke 1 million times before, also the animation, sound and length were terrible. Shit like this can be made in 1,5 hour but even then, any selfrespected animator would at least come up with his/her own joke or at least use an original one. I think its a good idea to nominate yourself for the next episode of your own show: 'You Are A Fuckin Moron'.
Still not fully impressed....
Iv watched all you egocity flashes and every time i watch them i cant help but think to myself: 'so much potential, but nothing more than that'. When u see the special effects and graphic style u use then some scenes are better than anything here on newgrounds. Amazing use of flares, slowmotion and fast camera movement. And yet it all simply doesnt feel like its at the right place. What is it that you are exactley making? A cool fastpaced action movie or some comedy which isnt funny? Id say remove the stupid comedy scenes and make it a cool sci fi flash. What u have now simply doesnt combine together. Also the dialogue and storyline are really subpar. The dialogue is childish and the storyline is too complicated and goes too fast to be really enjoyable. Plus i feel u overuse special effects a little bit. It seems that every 5 seconds there has to be something really fast and exciting to happen. The viewer easily loses interest and overview because of this. And finally, the voiceacting is really average but u must have heard that a thousand times before. Neway i hope u may take my advice in account, because i know for sure that if u manage to create something interesting and original u will be in the top 50 in no time. Take care...
man,
This flash is really the perfect way to insult a comicfan. I used to read alota comics while i was young, including batman and i was really looking forward to check what you have made.
The pain started when the bigass 'gothlam city' appeared on my screen. I almost closed the window down but i decided to give u one more chance. And yep, the last guy was right. In the cop/criminal scene, batman would have never stood there, amusingly watching how the criminal ices 2 cops. And then the entire thing is suddenly finished! I mean wtf, almost nothing happened yet. The top of the iceberg is that u credit John Williams for the batman soundtrack while it is composed by Daniel ELfman!! After the lousy credits u see the preloader screen again while the music simply keeps on playing...... You sir, you are the suk!
pretty original
While i was reading the author's comments i was thinking to myself: 'this could be interesting'...
And i was right, it was pretty interesting. Nice style of art and animation. I loved the fact that u could see the muscisians on the background of each scene. Still, i didnt think all the songs fitted the scenes perfectly. Plus the scenes were all pretty short and kinda the same. I would have been better if u didnt only animate violent situations but used different kinds of happenings. Like a love scene, a comedy scene and/or a gangster scene for example. But thats just my opinion.
well...
Well i guess it could have been alot worse. The graphics were okay overall. The backgrounds and some of the animation sequences made up for the sloppy stick figures. I also couldnt really understand what exactly was going on. I mean the blue guy was supposed to be some sort of ice man, but what was the purple guy shooting? Maybe some text or voice (i.o.w: motives) will be a nice addition. Nice choise of music though. Iv been a huge fan of the prodigy ever since their first cd. Well keep practising and take more time for ur next animation!
Well, i dont know if it will help you, but the purple guy was the red guy, who absorbed so much energi from the explosion he became a wizard of pure energy (i just dident make him strong enouge to fullfy his new form) but the meaning of it was that it was gonna be very fast, but if its so fast people cant see what it is :P i better put in some explanation
Great, great, great
Excellent parody. It was very funny, clever and really well thought out. Unlike other simple matrix spoofs this one is more original. The role of Tom as 'the architect' and the entire newgrounds world instead of the matrix one is simply brilliant. The music went well with it, the tweened text was hilarious and it was all kinda cool too. I demand more. At least 3 parts! Just try to work a little harder on the graphics in some scenes. Make them look a little smoother. Surely it must not be that hard to draw and animate square flash files eh? Neway, still awesome all the way.
very good
I remember seeing your other movie 'stitch' and i remember being pretty impressed by it. Once again u made a very good animation. What i like about these is that the viewer doesnt have a clue what the true meaning of the thing is and that only the creator (you) knows. But we can still think and fantasise about it. The music was great, the graphics could have been a little bit better in terms of detail and the dark feel of the movie came across very well and genuine. Im looking forward to see what your next project will be. Take care!
wow how original
The concept of the pencil drawing a character during an animation that 'comes to life' has been done a thousand times before (yes, even before pencilanimation). So the idea and concept are nothing but a ripoff. U dont bring anything to it that makes it cool again. I see this concept as a poor excuse to seperate this stick movie from other stick movies, just because it has the pencil in it. So nope, not original. Not even a cool plotline or something, just an animation where u expect the viewers to be amazed by the fact that everything is drawn 'semi-life' and there is some form of interaction between pencil and stick figure. Sorry, try harder next time.
The music was pretty cool though.
yeh right,
Im glad that u found the job at pixar. I can imagine how happy they must be, now they finally found a guy to clean the toilets.
Nothing in this movie made any sense and it wasnt entertaining or funny at all. I voted 6 for it because of the piece livecorpse made. Nothing more to say but: we don't <3 u, we <3 livecorpse.
woohoo, another episode!
Yes, yes, yes! another episode of my favorite anime series. I really started liking this after i watched all your episodes a couple of months ago. The drawings and animation are not the best, but the story totally makes up for that. But there is on big BUT. Where the hell is the voiceacting man? U promised it would be here and it isnt! :'( Neway this is still a great piece. More cinematic and professional than the other episodes and a good conclussion. Take care!
Sorry for the delay on voice acting.
We currently finished voices for sessions 1 to 3, and the rest should be coming along in due time.
We'd like to continue the series as originally paced however, and voices will be added in as we go. Thanks alot for the review, and I think we've improved the graphics quite a bit in the new chapter, and we hope you enjoy it too.
The future is female
Age 39, Male
Architecture Student
TU Delft
Amsterdam
Joined on 2/15/04
ZF Zhort #1: Poor Richard 
EgoCity Chap III 
Batman: dark knight 
Alter-ego 
The Magic Deathmatch 1 
NewGrounds Reloaded 
"Black' 
SketchMission 
Piconjo Jam #20 
XIN Session 09 